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This story happened six years ago to my family.One day when were holidays I with my family decided to that we are going to go for two days under the tent . The first thing which we had to do was to find a place which everybody liked it . My brother said that we are going to go on Mácháč . Everyone agreed . My mum packed things which we needed . The next day morning we got up at 7 o ´clock and run to the train . In the train we ate a snack . We arrived on Mácháč . My brother with my dad built the tent while they built I and mum cooked lunch on a small cooker. The first problem occurred when my brother detected that the tarpaulin on the tent is missing. Fortunately was sunny so it not assume a rain. We covered it with a blanket. Then we went to the pool and enjoyed the afternoon. It grew dark and we went to sleep to the tent . Everyone fell asleep from fatigue at once. At night me woke some sniff. I had a afraid ,but I did not wake up nobody and I imagined the worst monster. After a while the sniff stopped . I fell asleep . Other day I said about the sniff but we said me that it seemed to me something. Afternoon we sat by a pond and people who went next to us spoke also about the sniff. My parents said that they will stay up . However they fell asleep and I had to them wake up but everybody afraid of the sniff and nobody did not want to go out. We gave stone, scissors and paper . Unfortunately I lost and I had to go out . I opened the tent and a small hole I looked out . I really started very laugh . I imagined a very very horrible monster but turned out that it was a little hedgehog . Everybody relieved and other day we went to home. It was the great holidays.