Oprava příběh na angličtinu

I I'l never forget the holiday in Spain. Last summer I went with my family to Spain on holiday. We has lucky, because everyday in Spain was sunny and good weather. We stayed in hotel near the beach. We collected seashells and played volleyball. Sometimes we went to the beach for sunsents. We ate food I local restaurants. The food was delicious. We went swimming in the sea. The water in the was clear so I was amazed. One day we went on boat trip with dolphins so it was interesting experience. We visited some places and we visited Barcelona. Every evening we went to shop center and we talked together.
This holiday in Spain was the best holiday in my life

Mam si připravit na hodinu aj krátký příběh na téma unforgattable holiday.
To, co jsem napsala je to příběh? Dává to smysl? Splňuje to zadání?