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Angličtina

Dobrý den, přátelé,
mám na Vás dotaz - psala jsem tento sloh (podobně jako k maturitě, na kterou se chci pečlivě připravit). Mohla bych Vás poprosit o názor, zda to je gramaticky, stylisticky a po stránce slovní zásoby v pořádku? Zda to odpovídá maturitní úrovni?
Moc Vám děkuji.

WELCOME TO THE ZOO
I always wanted to visit a zoo. I adore animals. Last week my wish became true. My mother bought me two zoo tickets. I took my best friend with me. If only I hadn’t let my camera at home! However, the zoo where I was worth a visit.
At first I was absolutely excited. I saw a lot of animals in front of me. I was fascinated by mammals and my friend admired reptiles and fish. If I had had enough money, I would have fed fish with her.
In addition, I saw animals that are become extinct.
Although I don’t like plants, I was amazed when I saw exotic trees and bushes. They were gorgeous.
The best thing that I experienced on this trip was my encounter with a pelican. I desired to stroke him. To cut a long story short, the pelican became angry and pecked me.
What’s more, my friend and I enjoyed it.
What about you? Have you ever been to a zoo?




WELCOME TO THE ZOO
I always wanted to visit a zoo. I adore animals. Last week my wish became true. My mother bought me two zoo tickets. I took my best friend with me. If only I hadn’t let my camera at home! However, the zoo where I was worth a visit.
At first I was absolutely excited. I saw a lot of animals in front of me. I was fascinated by mammals and my friend admired reptiles and fish. If I had had enough money, I would have fed fish with her.
In addition, I saw animals that are become extinct.
Although I don’t like plants, I was amazed when I saw exotic trees and bushes. They were gorgeous.
The best thing that I experienced on this trip was my encounter with a pelican. I desired to stroke him. To cut a long story short, the pelican became angry and pecked me.
What’s more, my friend and I enjoyed it.
What about you? Have you ever been to a zoo?
Témata: angličtina

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bought me two zoo tickets: možná "bought two tickets to the zoo for me"

However, the zoo where I was worth a visit.
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animals that are become extinct
are becoming

I desired to stroke him
I wanted to pet him (stroke his feathers).

What’s more,
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I desired to stroke it. (zvířata jsou stř. rodu, kromě snad naše ho psa nebo kočky)
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