Pomoc s angličtinou

Anonym31172317.03.2012 17:34 Nahlásit
Ahoj, prosím zkontroloval by mi někdo tento text na AJ? Děkuji One day I woke up with fever and indigestion. It was last summer holydays. Outside the sun was shining, the sky was without cloudless and I lay in bed with fever. I slept all day. At night I woke up a twice and in the morning I went to my doctor. The doctor took my temperature with thermometer and a listen to my heart with stetoscope. Then he wrote a prescription for a special medicine. So I took it to a pharmacy. Two days ago I was healthy. During the year I am not seriously ill. Only sometimes runny nose, fever, flu or sore throat. I go go to the regular checking to the GP (general practitional), dentist and eye doctor (oční). I never had a broken arm or leg. Just when I was five or six, I burned the palm of the plate and knocked my front tooth. But I was really long time ago, so I don ´t remeber.

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Anonym25854126.03.2012 21:16 Nahlásit
Neumím zas tak dobře anglicky, abych to celé opravil...ale v tom druhém řádku "the sky was without cloudless" je určitě špatně, a to "I lay in bed with fever" taky-minulý čas. 3. řádek-"at night I woke up a twice"-bez členu, 4. řádek-"and a listen to my heart with stetoscope"-bez členu a minulý čas, 5. řádek "two days ago I was healthy" taky špatně, místo ago later, 4. řádek odspodu-jen jedno go, poslední věta-"but I was really long time ago" by mělo být spíš "but it is really a long time". Určitě tam jsou ještě nějaké další chyby, tak mě někdo kdyžtak doplňte :)
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