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Anonym26666826.05.2011 18:10 Nahlásit
Prosím, nenašel by by se tady někdo ochotný překontrolovat mi uvedený text. Kdyby snad byl někdo na tolik ochotný a trpělivý byla bych moc ráda.

There is no denying that paying for education at the universities has a number of advantages. The universities would have more money to buy good equipment and employ better lecturers and experts. For this reason they can afford to offer the quality education and they would increase their prestige. Furthermore, they would be able to give more scholarships. Paying for education can be also good for students - they don’t spend all their money on unnecessary things. In addition, students would appreciate their education more and perhaps take it more seriously.


Some people take the opposite view and claim that the introducing tuition is not a good idea. The critics of it say the the universities can use the money from the tuition for wrong purposes. But perhaps the biggest disadvatage is that there’re a lot of clever and talented young people from poor families, who don’t have money for paying tuition will not get their chance to study. Furthermore, students would find a part time job to pay their education so they would have less time to study. It definitely doesn’t help them in getting good grades.

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Katulea07.06.2011 18:49 Nahlásit
Nevím, jestli ta první věta má znamenat: Není pochyb o tom, že placení školného atd... , ale jestli ano, asi by bylo lepší napsat: Without doubts paying for education at universities has a number of advantages... :)
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