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Hi my friend,
I'm writing you this postcard to tell you about my trip to London.
I arrived to London at 1 p.m. on Monday and the next day at 10 a.m. I was shopping. After lunch at 2 p.m. I visited the British Museum. It was a beautiful museum. On Wednesday at midday I took a London double-decker bus and at 2 p.m. I was at Buckingham Palace. And today on Thursday I have visited Big Ben at 10 a.m. and at 8 p.m. I was supposed to have London by Night Walking Tour, but due to the freezing it was canceled. It's a pity.
But tomorrow, I'm going to a football match. It will be Chelseas's match against Arsenal. And on Saturday I'm going to be at 9 a.m. at airport, because I fly home.
Témata: angličtina

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Před spojkami (but because, ...) se nepíší čárky jako v češtině.
Za tomorrow také bez čárky.
Chelsea's
midday - je to vůbec slovo? Slýchávám jen noon.
It IS a beautiful museum.
at the airport
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to co řekl Cunyvar +

I arrived IN London
I WENT shopping bude lepší
I took a London double-decker bus - vynechej "London" pokud se nesnažíš narvat tam co nejvíce slov, jinak to tam klidně nech
I VISITED the Buckingham Palace bude lepší
And today, on Thursday, I have - osobně bych tam dal čárky, ale to je detail
at 8 p.m. I was supposed to go on a night tour of London/the city
but due to the freezing WEATHER/CONDITIONS/TEMPERATURE
and on saturday at 9 a.m. I have a flight home

+ chybí ukončení dopisu

Midday určitě slovo je, stále se běžně použivá

Osobně bych v dopise nepoužíval tolik a.m./p.m., nepůsobí to přirozeně když je to více méně v každé větě.
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