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The magazine article about Jayk3M!
Did you ever hear about Jayk3M? Of course! His real name is Miroslav Konečný. He is 18. He lives with his sister and mother in Nový Jičín. Jay3M is very famous singer (or MC, because he does rap) on the Internet. His songs are at top five in music chart for months (www.bandzone.cz). His lurid carer started when he before two years lost his girlfriend and recognized a song „I am sad”. It was his first good song. He won a TV competition „Master’s plate” and everything was changed.
What was life like before he became famous? He was a normally boy. He went to school and went out with his friends. He didn’t have friends from lots of places, but only from his class and a local disco. He hasn’t got any show in clubs every weekend, but he went to the swimming pool with his father. He didn’t have any fans. People didn’t know anything about him and didn’t ask for his autograph.
How has his life changed since he became famous? People recognized him in the street and ask him for his autograph. He started be very proud, bigheaded and lost lots of his old friends. He started use drugs and found a now girlfriend, but he lost her next time too. About 300 000 people saw his music profile on the Bandzone, but nobody can’t help him. He has got his own concert every week. Girls love him, because his songs are very romantic. He lives in his own world, in his sad world with his dreams. I hope, that he can everything change, that it will be better, that he will be happy sometimes! His life was difficult, but it isn’t better now. It isn’t better for him and for his mother too. He is very interesting as him story.
Did you ever hear about Jayk3M? Of course! His real name is Miroslav Konečný. He is 18. He lives with his sister and mother in Nový Jičín. Jay3M is very famous singer (or MC, because he does rap) on the Internet. His songs are at top five in music chart for months (www.bandzone.cz). His lurid carer started when he before two years lost his girlfriend and recognized a song „I am sad”. It was his first good song. He won a TV competition „Master’s plate” and everything was changed.
What was life like before he became famous? He was a normally boy. He went to school and went out with his friends. He didn’t have friends from lots of places, but only from his class and a local disco. He hasn’t got any show in clubs every weekend, but he went to the swimming pool with his father. He didn’t have any fans. People didn’t know anything about him and didn’t ask for his autograph.
How has his life changed since he became famous? People recognized him in the street and ask him for his autograph. He started be very proud, bigheaded and lost lots of his old friends. He started use drugs and found a now girlfriend, but he lost her next time too. About 300 000 people saw his music profile on the Bandzone, but nobody can’t help him. He has got his own concert every week. Girls love him, because his songs are very romantic. He lives in his own world, in his sad world with his dreams. I hope, that he can everything change, that it will be better, that he will be happy sometimes! His life was difficult, but it isn’t better now. It isn’t better for him and for his mother too. He is very interesting as him story.
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I have seen 'rap' in text and gave up.