Angličtina - kontrola
Dobrý den, měli jsme za úkol popsat svou oblíbenou fotku a tady je můj výtvor, ale potřebovala bych ho zkontrolovat.
Mockrát děkuji :)
In my favourite photo is my grandmother, sister, friends and I with a lots of animals.
My mom took this picture on holiday in Medlovice about 10 years ago, when I was 7 years.
We were on holiday at grandma and she went to feed the animals. She had rabbits, chickens, goats, kid, pig, rooster and goslings.
Shortly after that she put the basket of grass in the middle of a backyard,
come to him about 20 rabbits, 2 kid, 10 goslings and hen. It reminded us a little zoo.
We stood around and my mom could take a photo.
I keep this picture in an album with all my favourite photos.
I like this photo because whenever I look at it, I equip a wonderful childhood spent with sister and friends in our little zoo.
Mockrát děkuji :)
In my favourite photo is my grandmother, sister, friends and I with a lots of animals.
My mom took this picture on holiday in Medlovice about 10 years ago, when I was 7 years.
We were on holiday at grandma and she went to feed the animals. She had rabbits, chickens, goats, kid, pig, rooster and goslings.
Shortly after that she put the basket of grass in the middle of a backyard,
come to him about 20 rabbits, 2 kid, 10 goslings and hen. It reminded us a little zoo.
We stood around and my mom could take a photo.
I keep this picture in an album with all my favourite photos.
I like this photo because whenever I look at it, I equip a wonderful childhood spent with sister and friends in our little zoo.
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In my favourite photo THERE is my grandmother,...
2 kids - Množné číslo, nicméně osobně bych v úkolu použil spisovné children.
We stood around and my mom could take a photo.
Já teda nevím, ale moc nerozumim tomu could, dal bych tam my mom just took a photo.
Ještě to po mě někdo překontrolujte
Minimálně kbelík neni he ale it, a slovosled bych taky trochu pošteloval, začal bych nejdřív tim mnohonásobným podmětem
I equip a wonderful childhood spent?
Equip je bvybavit se, ale vybavením. It reminds me of wonde...
Vybavit si = see, call back
bud je "a lot of" nebo jen "lots of" bez clenu
"i was 7" nebo "i was 7 years old"
"remind" se vzdycky poji s "of"
jeste bych dala "with MY sister", privlastnovaci zajmena nacpat vsude, kam to jde
vim, ze je to ted uz trochu passe, ale co uz:D