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A Concert Review

Ahoj, ve škole budem psát něco jako slohovku na téma koncert ... Něco jsem si připravila ale vím že je tam milion chyb , jestli byste mě mohli na takove ty nejdulezitejši upozornit ?? (hlavně mám zmatek v časech) čím dřív tím líp ....:

Last year, thousands of fans went to the O2 Arena in Prague to see American singer, Gwen Stefani. All the tickets were sold out and the auditorium was full of people waiting for Gwen. Before she starts her performance there were some German amateurs singing some cheap songs. Luckily for me and the crowd they didn´t stay for long. Finally, Gwen´s band were on the stage, but Gwen didn´t. Suddenly they started to play song The Sweet Escape and the stage split in half and Gwen came from nowhere. She was in huge gold cage, then she jump off and started to sing. It was spectacular.
She was singing a lot of songs such as Hollaback Girl, Rich Girl, Wind It Up… She even ran into the crowd and starts singing song called Cool. During some songs some people were singing with her and you could saw that they really enjoy the show. Although I don´t really listen that kind of music she sing, I still have to admit that she is amazing singer... It was a wonderful atmosphere and I have no regrets about being there.
The last song she was singing was song called “What you waiting for” it´s the same song she started her carrier after she left from No Doubt…It was a little bit disappointing that she do not sing not even one song from the times she used to be in No Doubt but still I think it was exciting performance of shining star...
Témata: angličtina

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No neco by se tam naslo, je to velmi dobre napsany na to jaky podivny chyby tam jsou :)

Before she started ...
Finally, Gwen´s band entered the stage ...
Suddenly, they started playing the song ...
... and Gwen turned up from nowhere carried in a huge gold cage - then she jumped off and started to sing.
She even ran into the crowd and started a song called ...
During some songs people joined her to sing along and one could see them really enjoying the show.
... really listen to (listen vzdycky s "to") that kind of music, (*bez she sings) ....
... she is an amazing singer ...
The last song she sang was a song “What you waiting for” it´s the same song she started her carrier with after leaving from No Doubt.
... disappointing that she did not sing ...
... rom the times she was a part/member of No Doubt but still - i think it was an exciting perfofmance of a shining star.
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jeste pred tim "carried" koukam by melo bejt "being" :)
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a jeste neco jsem napsal spatne - "started WITH a song called ...".
- misto "a song" muzes pouzit "a piece" nebo "a tune" at se to porad neopakuje.
- misto sing muzes obcas pouzit "perform" nebo "give", "play" ze stejnyho duvodu
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díky ;-)
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Jeste jsem se chtela zeptat jak je tahle veta : She even ran into the crowd and started a tune called Cool.

tak jestli za tim started by nemelo jeste neco být (sing nebo tak neco) protoze jako věta : Dokonce vběhla do davu a začala písničkou Cool.. tak to je vlastně jinej význam mělo by to být jako že vběhla do davu a začala zpívat nebo tak ne?...
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aha to jo :), takze jestli vbehla do davu a zacala zpivat az kdyz tam byla tak by to mohlo bejt "and started (with) a tune", ale jestli tam vbehla a uz to mela rozjety tak to bude jenom "singing a tune ..." nebo "while singing a tune called ..." nebo "the tune" ale pak bez "called".
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takze to muze byt takhle ? : She even ran into the crowd singing a tune called Cool. ????
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Rozhodne. Minulej prubehovej cas se m.j. pouziva pri vyjadrovani pozadi deje, kterej probehl v minulosti. Tady je ten dej v minulosti ze "vbehla do davu" a na pozadi toho deje ona zpivala, ok? Neboli zpivala predtim nez tam vbehla, behem to ho nabehu a i pote co tam byla. Takze by se to v ucebnici napsalo jako "She was singing a song when she ran into the crowd." nebo "She ran into the crowd while she was singing a song.". No a to se da prave napsat i jako "She ran into the crowd, singing a song ...", kde to "singig" je gerundium(zpivajic), ale pracuje tu stejne jako minulej prubehovej cas, kterymu to je konec koncu podobny.
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Jeste jedna poznamka k pouzivani clenu u toho "tune/song". Kdyz pouzijes neurcitej clen, pak davas najevo, ze si myslis, ze ctenari clanku tu vec spis neznaji "a tune called 'Ooby-dooby huh'". Kdyz pouzijes urcitej clen, pak davas najevo, ze vime o cem mluvime "the tune Stairway to Haven", protoze:
1. ta pisnicka je znama tak, ze by se leckdo mohl urazit protoze si myslis ze ji nezna
2. tu pisnicku jsi uz zminovala driv ve stejnym clanky, takze vime o cem mluvime - pak neni nutny psat "called", prave proto ze vsichni vime o co jde.
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