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Where someone asks me about my favourite place,I always remember my home.As I said before, my favourite place is my home because it is a place where I live,where I grew up and feel safely. When i come home I know that there is somebody who is waiting for me who loves me. But my favourite place is not just my home. I have a lot of favourite places, but as the proverb says East or West, home is best.