Angličtina, sloh

Anonym22421831.05.2011 18:17 Nahlásit
Dobrý den, chtěla jsem poprosit někoho, kdo umí anglicky lépe než já (takže kohokoli :-) ), jestli by se mi nepodíval na krátký sloh. Už tu nad tím sedím asi dvě hodiny, ale stejně se obávám, že to bude plné chyb. :(

Děkuju moc. :-)


My life
I was born by the river..sing my favourite singer in one of his song. But I wasn´t born there. I´m absolutely ordinary girl and I came to life in a hospital like others ordinary girls and boys. But I hope my life will be more interesting.

I´ve been living in a little village not far from České Budějovice. I´ve got a good parents, one younger sister and many other great people around me.

I think my life is full of interesting experiences. When I was four I saw a sea first time. It was in a Turkey with my grandparents. Several years later I was in a summer camp. It was first time I was without my family. Little worried girl in the big world, I will never forget it.

But now I´m big and I´ve been attending at secondary school in our town. I started to planning my future.I would like to make my school leaving exam and then I would like to study at university. But I´m not sure what I want to do when I´ll grow up. But time goes by very quickly, so I´m afraid I´ll have to start to think about it.

But I´m sure I want my life not to be boring. I would like to have a good husbend, two kind children, big house with garden and a great job. And plenty of money, of course. I know, I´m young and maybe I´m a big idealist. But..who not?

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Spoony01.06.2011 19:10 Nahlásit
Pár chybiček tam je, pokud máš zájem ještě (což pochybuju, protože už utekl celý den)..
Anonym30176011.12.2011 17:15 Nahlásit
aj my píšeme v utorok sloh z AJ a necítim sa na to velmi...temy nám dajú na hodine.. :/
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