Slohová práce - kontrola.
Dobrý den,
přátelé, posílám Vám sem moji slohovou práci. Chtěla bych se Vás zeptat, zda to je takhle v pořádku Moc Vám děkuji.
WELCOME TO THE ZOO
I always wanted to visit a zoo. I adore animals. Last week my wish became true. My mother bought me two tickets to the zoo. With these tickets the entrance was discounted. I took my best friend with me. If only I hadn’t let a camera at home! If I had my camera, I would make many photos with animals. However, the zoo where I was worth visiting.
At first I was absolutely excited. I saw a lot of animals in front of me. I was interested in mammals and my friend admired reptiles and fish. If I hadn’t observed beasts so long, I would have fed fish with her. I was really surprised when I saw animals that are become extinct. There is almost no chance to see them in the wild.
Althought I don’t like plants, I was amazed when I saw exotic trees and bushes. They were gorgeous.
The best thing that I experienced on this trip was my encounter with a pelican. I desired to stroke him. To cut a long story short, the pelican became angry and pecked me.
What’s more, my friend and I enjoyed it.
What about you? Have you ever been to zoo? If I were you, I would visit the zoo. Your experience will would it, I swear.
přátelé, posílám Vám sem moji slohovou práci. Chtěla bych se Vás zeptat, zda to je takhle v pořádku Moc Vám děkuji.
WELCOME TO THE ZOO
I always wanted to visit a zoo. I adore animals. Last week my wish became true. My mother bought me two tickets to the zoo. With these tickets the entrance was discounted. I took my best friend with me. If only I hadn’t let a camera at home! If I had my camera, I would make many photos with animals. However, the zoo where I was worth visiting.
At first I was absolutely excited. I saw a lot of animals in front of me. I was interested in mammals and my friend admired reptiles and fish. If I hadn’t observed beasts so long, I would have fed fish with her. I was really surprised when I saw animals that are become extinct. There is almost no chance to see them in the wild.
Althought I don’t like plants, I was amazed when I saw exotic trees and bushes. They were gorgeous.
The best thing that I experienced on this trip was my encounter with a pelican. I desired to stroke him. To cut a long story short, the pelican became angry and pecked me.
What’s more, my friend and I enjoyed it.
What about you? Have you ever been to zoo? If I were you, I would visit the zoo. Your experience will would it, I swear.