Michal David - Céčka (anglický překlad)

Prosím, nějaký angličtinář, můžete mi to zkontrolovat? Dal jsem si s tím fakt hodně práce, aby se to rýmovalo a dalo zpívat, ale nevím, jestli by to tak fakt řekl rodilý Američan.

1.

I’ve just received a letter today,
she says she’d only wasted time my way,
a lot of water will flow and pass
before I meet her again at some disco dance.

2.

We could be lovers, a world-famous pair,
if I could bring her a real, precious gift to share,
once I catch on and bring it to her,
slow songs without her — I just can’t endure.

R.

C-charms, she wants those C-charms — that’s where the harm is,
and I had no idea what she was wanting,
C-charms, she’s after C-charms — so what is stopping
me from just finding some and straight away running?

3.

I roam the city from store to store,
begging in some, in others ask for more,
coins in my pocket jingle their plea —
but nobody’s moved or taking pity on me.

4. = 2.
R.
R.
R. (fading out)